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Go my little brush-drawn furball, go, go, go!
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But because I dont want to be mean, i will tell you how to fix it.
A. Make it more violent, when people see the title SHOOT ASH! make it mean SHOOT ASH, like make his head explode and add different ways to shoot him, the same blood splat gets booooring.
B. Add a bar or percent counter to your loading screen to let people know it's actually loading
C. Your music loop is terrible... sorry; it cuts out and makes an odd silence at the end before it replays. Go to AS:Main in the forums and find the Volume Slider tutorial because the repetition of a broken loop drives people insane
D. Work a little more on the graphics. The brush tool work was too obvious. Try a new technique of drawing... I mean, I dont own a Wacom Tablet but I take my time with the mouse and my drawings come out half decent.
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Hitler was a facist, not a terrorist, and was it even necessary to throw that in there??? Still some of the stuff was funny.
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That doesn't look like pico... It looks like a bunch of mashed up lines.
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No Point... OMG I really can't believe that you actually made this... Stick with Sift Heads' storyline because Sift Heads is awesome and I cant wait for Vinnie to once again show up around NG.
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The game is ok but nothing too new. Ive seen games like this before but since there are a lot of these, I can trust that it isnt stolen.
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Its probbaly your first or second flash right??? Well Its ok just a little too easy, I made a game like this for my first game but I made it really difficult to entertain the player, moving obstacles and such, over all its an ok game but if it had more of a challange than players would enjoy it more. Hope this advice helps.
Author's Response:
First that I really tried on. Also, all I used for this was a on(rollover), not some complicated script, so I couldn't really make things like moving objects.
And yes, your advice differs from the usual "2 easy i just right clicked this shit", so thanks. =D
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The storyline made almost no sense, I had to watch this twice to piece it together, the extra didnt even work and furthermore, how on earth are you admitting to taking sound fx from someone elses flash in the credits??? Just crediting the maker of the flash does not make it ok to steal the sound fx. So you earn a nice big 0.
Author's Response:
And xiao xiao is a kind of SFX ,the dude didnt knew how to name them so he told me to call it xiao xiao
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The Player Object moves too slow to catch the ball.
Author's Response:
Maybe your just slow and "old". :DXD
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Kind of confusing at first and if you cant get past a lvl, you can right click and hit forward.
You can hide the menu with the code in the "Flash Game Source" tutorial which is on
Newgrounds>Collections>Flash Tutorials
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